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« Thread Started on Aug 22, 2006, 8:25am »		[Quote]

Seastorm walked into her den. Her blue eyes narrowed. She sat down. Thinking hard about her dead relatives. She did this every night. She curled up. Remembering her best friend. The medicine cat often stayed alone. But she just had alot on her mind. She shook her head. Turning to see if she had to replenish any herbs. Poppy flowers...Burdock root...Yarrow...Mint she listed the ones she needed again. Then said aloud "I will collect them at dawn". She lay down to sleep.
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Re: Pacing
« Reply #1 on Aug 22, 2006, 6:41pm »		[Quote]
OOC: ::) >:( Seastorm, I am very angry with you. You didn't even read the rules on RPing, and it shows as clear as everything. Once you learn how to RP, You may post again. Never, ever, ever do this again, or you will no longer be medicine cat. I am so disapointed that I thought you would be a good addition to this site. Either RP correctly, or see what I'll do.
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« Reply #2 on Aug 23, 2006, 10:40pm »		[Quote]
OOC: Sometimes it is hard to remember how to RP correctly because many different sites do it in the way you posted. Like Nightstar said, refer to the Rp rules. If you need any help, please pm me. Sign up for RP classes if you haven't already!
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Re: Pacing
« Reply #3 on Aug 23, 2006, 10:44pm »		[Quote]

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Seastorm walked into her den. Her blue eyes narrowed. She sat down. Thinking hard about her dead relatives. She did this every night. She curled up. Remembering her best friend. The medicine cat often stayed alone. But she just had alot on her mind. She shook her head. Turning to see if she had to replenish any herbs. Poppy flowers...Burdock root...Yarrow...Mint she listed the ones she needed again. Then said aloud "I will collect them at dawn". She lay down to sleep.


Your post should look like this:
[b]*Seastorm walked into her den. Her blue eyes narrow. She sits down, thinking hard about her dead relatives. She did this every night. She curls up. Remembering her best friend, the medicine cat often stayed alone. But she just had alot on her mind. She shook her head. She turns to see if she has to replenish any herbs. Poppy flowers...Burdock root...Yarrow...Mint she listed the ones she needed again. Then said aloud* I will collect them at dawn* She lay down to sleep

This is the correct way of RPing, but you could still work on correct grammar and all!!
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